The Old Ploughman Poem by Stug Jordan

The Old Ploughman

Rating: 5.0


He lifts the old cup to his mouth like a cross,
a breakfast table Communion of brown tea and toast.
He goes out, one foot firmly in front of the other.

He wipes his lined face, looking into the sun
with a hand against his eyes to read the clouds.
He kicks his dozy mare into consciousness.

The old plough rattles lazily through stones,
raking through the stubble of the dry field.
He coughs between furrows, unheard in his field.

He stoops back in, to bread and half a boiled egg,
his cup receiving its second baptism of the day.
He sits back slowly, his feet pushing the fireguard.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elysabeth Faslund 25 August 2007

You have nailed down concrete images of a not-so-simple ploughman's daily life in this poem! In words and word paintings, making the lines easy to follow, and heart-rending to realize the truth of. Oh no, people! This is definitely NOT a dull poem...there is extraordinary life here, in abundance! ! ! Great, good, BEST! xxElysabeth

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