At Loose Poem by Stug Jordan

At Loose

Rating: 4.3


When can we be lazy?
like two dogs, with eyes half open;
stretching our legs through the grass,
laying; getting almost nothing done.

We can stab through leaves
with our long legs, noses in the bush;
as happy as a pair of ponies,
released like birds into a muddy field.

Should we complicate the sounds
of the farm with our voices?
like two old cockerels, throwing up songs;
as free as if our wings could fly all day.

Where shall we sleep tonight?
huddled together like mice in a hole;
unobserved by the curious winds
that rattle above our heads in the night.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Very... hmmn... animalistic; and sexy with it. Oh - and finely penned. Do all of these go without saying? :) t x

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Scarlett Treat 17 April 2007

Great images here...and a very good lesson for all of us, to slow down, smell the air, wag our tails a bit, and enjoy life, if only for a moment! !

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Original Unknown Girl 16 April 2007

Love the last stanza especially! Your imagination knows no bounds it seems, like this a lot. HG: -) xx

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Sally Knox 13 April 2007

Your imagery is amazing. I really love your poetry.

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