The Ones Left Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

The Ones Left

Rating: 5.0


The news has just come

He’s dead.

In his garden the flowers bloom

Oblivious

He’s no more.

His house breathes sorrow

He would have boarded the train today
and come back tomorrow!

Come back he will now

Whitened in frozen breath

Silently receiving
Untimely wreath!

She and their son
Brutally torn
Will enter not a house but hell
Without him but with his smell
Each object still warm
With his touch of care

And their wails
will rend the night air!

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
My friend, my next door neighbor, is dead, untimely, while on vacation with his wife and son.
I’m devastated. His body is reaching home this night for cremation.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lorraine Colon 06 January 2014

I'm sorry for the loss of your friend. Somehow, it hurts more when it is totally unexpected, but time will heal the pain.

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Bijay Poudel 05 January 2014

Heartfelt sympathies! !

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Lyn Paul 04 January 2014

Written so beautifully through your heartache Pradip. Deepest sympathy sent for this sadness.

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