The Pain Disappears Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

The Pain Disappears

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The pain disappears
When you refuse to wear out
Stand alone like rock
And take it as joke

You accept it smilingly
As any time it may appear readily
At one moment it will be joy
And very next moment it will seem decoy

Think it was just wind’s blow
Came at once and offered flow
Feel its cruelty and forget
Be always ready to get on

Smile does not mean loud laugh
Internal happiness is enough
Try for another venture
It may show you good future

Brush it aside
It proves slight
Discouraging with failure
One should think less and make doubly sure

Wednesday, April 9, 2014
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Amitava Sur 10 April 2014

Human life itself is structured with pain, to continue life you have to agree with.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

i like it Anthony Elion Jr.9 minutes ago This is deep keep it up! This is vivid too Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

it''s okay steven king6 minutes ago I am really not comfortable doing this, it's been over 10 years since I was last here and this was never imposed upon an author back then. Who am I to critique someone else work. I simply want to reclaim several poems that have bee archived. It would be easier to just delete them from the database.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 April 2014

The pain disappears When you refuse to wear out

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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