The Path You Take Without Me Poem by Linda Barnes

The Path You Take Without Me



I hate the path we took
Because you brought me with you
Through the darkness and the smog
I followed you faithfully

I remember the day we met
It was memorable and hopeful
How could I have known
We would end up miserable

How I long for those days
When life seemed invisible
A life with you I had hoped
To be loved and treasured

Many good times we shared
So much life still before us
Only to be smothered
In an abyss of quicksand

As I look to the stars
My eyes wide open
Followed by seamless heartache
With my soul now lost without you

I look toward the future
Not sure of what will behold me
Remembering that day and
The path you take without me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 22 December 2015

Love and pain! But with hope; still looking for the future. Nice work.

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Linda Barnes 22 December 2015

Thank you for reading my poem. I appreciate your feedback

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