Thursday, January 28, 2016

The Peak Comments

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In a mountain meadow,
water flows from a rock.

Moss is green and thick
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Barry Middleton
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Pamela Sinicrope 22 May 2017

Another beautiful imagistic and comforting poem. I imagine the view atop the tallest mountain. The last 4 lines pull in not only image, but the sounds of a rushing creak and a crackling fire. A crackling fire is really a soothing and comforting image...pulls at the roots of our being and existence. Well conceived. Thanks for sharing Barry. Maybe we could include this one too?

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Barry Middleton 22 May 2017

Thanks Pamela. Feel free to include any of my work. Glad you like this one

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