I woke up to that bright light,
Opened my eyes wide for that radiant sight,
And there I Saw a full moon night;
MOON light peeping from my window - on my bed side.
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Wonderful poem..nice arrangement of poetic words! Congrats! !
Thanks for your precious comments...its motivating me and the poetess within me..! ! ! This is my first poem in public...I'm sure i have long way to go..! ! ! ! I wish to write a novel before the evening of my life....
Rich flow of thought with captivating images. Beautiful piece of poetry embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Lovely, insightful, and passionate. Thanks for sharing Bijal.
Thanks a ton.....This piece of writing is very dear to me as i have really experienced such beauty at 3: 00 am midnight...in my room...then and there i penned it down into words...the experience was priceless and gave me eternal peace...your comment adds glory to it..gracious..! !
A great start with a nice poem, Bijal. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks