Thursday, September 28, 2017

The Perfect Moonlight Comments

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I woke up to that bright light,
Opened my eyes wide for that radiant sight,
And there I Saw a full moon night;
MOON light peeping from my window - on my bed side.
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Jazib Kamalvi 29 September 2017

A great start with a nice poem, Bijal. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 September 2017

Wonderful poem..nice arrangement of poetic words! Congrats! !

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Bijal Gala Shah 29 September 2017

Thanks for your precious comments...its motivating me and the poetess within me..! ! ! This is my first poem in public...I'm sure i have long way to go..! ! ! ! I wish to write a novel before the evening of my life....

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Chinedu Dike 29 September 2017

Rich flow of thought with captivating images. Beautiful piece of poetry embellished in poetic rhyme and rhythm. Lovely, insightful, and passionate. Thanks for sharing Bijal.

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Bijal Gala Shah 29 September 2017

Thanks a ton.....This piece of writing is very dear to me as i have really experienced such beauty at 3: 00 am midnight...in my room...then and there i penned it down into words...the experience was priceless and gave me eternal peace...your comment adds glory to it..gracious..! !

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