Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 385,581 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

The Personal Glory - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Do not stick to your poem alone
From your hand it has already gone
Just divert attention other poems
Address them with your concern

Read reader’s comment in recognition
With so much of exhibition
Interest, love and affection
That shall build bridge and relation

There is improvement in approach
Many poets are reading and trying to reach
With suitable noting and response
It shows clear stance

Where do we fail then?
We are getting involved in
Replying to return comment and thank
That defeats purpose and others turn blank

Pick at least two new poets to read
Provide clear thinking and lead
Many are trying to prove only talent
The real spirit remains totally absent

I shall request often
But such approach irritates even
Why to run after personal glory?
You have earned already

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Comments about The Personal Glory by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Jenie Franksay (3/31/2015 11:08:00 AM)


    a lovely write... love it.. you expressed the bitter reality going on here.. it changed my viewpoint... yhanks a lot.. (Report) Reply

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/31/2015 10:06:00 AM)


    Hasmukh Mehta welcome Alpa Suba and Ibrahim Lawal Soro like this.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/31/2015 10:03:00 AM)


    Hasmukh Mehta welcome 리 likes this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome 모나리 likes this.
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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/31/2015 9:56:00 AM)


    Do not stick to your poem alone
    From your hand it has already gone
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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, March 31, 2015



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