Saturday, July 18, 2015

The Phoenix Comments

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Every morning she rises
From the ashes of her past
With a heart full of life
Casting a light bright and vast.
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Bhavyakeerti Bohrey
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Bharati Nayak 27 November 2015

'And remember before throwing her to the wolves That she will return leading the pack- - - - - - - - - - - Naturally gifted with finer qualities like love, grace, , beauty and care, a woman also possesses an undying spirit of a warrior, the courage, and strength to fight all odds.Like a Phoenix she rises from ashes.

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Fabrizio Frosini 18 July 2015

She might be the last thing you see As an assassin or a charmer - - - - nice and interesting lines.. And remember before throwing her to the wolves That she will return leading the pack. - - - - to respect a woman is just to respect a human being.. male and female are just the same: the two faces of the same medal - but women are wiser, usually.. ;)

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Thank you :) I believe that males and females are equal. But I also believe that nature has always made the females more durable as compared to the males. While both complete each other, the females of every species and race are always stronger, though sometimes people forget that. I think that all females should remember and acknowledge their strengths and keep moving forward because that's what we were built for. All of them should always remember that they are no less than the males and they should be proud to be a lady. Just my PoV :)

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Allotey Abossey 18 July 2015

This is beautiful poetry... I enjoyed reading. Good work

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Bhavyakeerti Bohrey 02 August 2015

Thank you :) I am glad that people like this poem, even though I wrote it in a hurry.

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