May be it is stupid
But it did happen
Months back
I lost my poem
Seems like eon has gone
May be it is crazy
That my search
Is still continued
For the words
I misplaced
May be it is carelessness
For it could be
A new beginning
Of another poem
May be it is funny
That it slipped away
From my mind
In the tunnel of time
Yet the search is on
I know i will find it again
And put it on a paper
In a way
That it will fill
The lonely space inside me
And take all my pain.
'That it will fill The lonely space inside me And take all my pain.' Wonderful poem, love it with 10.
We have all had this experience. Those words may come back to you one day. But, in any case, You must write on. And you have done so in this appealing offering. Kind regards, Sandra
This is a wonderful poem that builds up to a very poignant finish. Very well written. Jim
You have written this with much honesty and regret. Sometimes we find things when we are not looking for them. Before you go to sleep, shut your eyes and ask if it can come in your dreams and keep paper and pen beside you. If it doesn't come back to you, perhaps you were meant to lose it and find what you are looking for in some other way. Very beautiful work. 10 Karin Anderson
What have you written that is my own- so beautiful and toucy. I love this melodious work with 10.
Words sometimes they lose themselves, wandering off into someone elses land. Given time they will return to write even more charming poems like this. Keep writing you are a star in the making.
well done again..i am enjoying this poem... written in a sweet way, , , best of luck...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
well done..its really an impressive poem with sweet idea and done in frack way..like it...sure you got 10 out of 10... hope you like my poetry too... best of luck