Sunday, March 9, 2008

* * * The Poetical G-Gravitation * Comments

Rating: 3.6

Lucifer’s grief can’t mar
The divine radiance
Any more.
More radiant is
...
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Tsira Gogeshvili
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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 September 2008

'The world Where we fly, Is high above… Higher than the cuckoo’s Minute nest On the rainbow.' Lovely.10 for it.

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Greenwolfe 1962 23 May 2008

It's obvious you don't read Stephen King. GW62

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shel cope 21 March 2008

Fly Tsira! ...beautiful imagery

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Gregory Collins 20 March 2008

nest on the rainbow in the one color missing sweet from within

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Dr.subhendu Kar 16 March 2008

it is the force of gravity that attracts all to the lap of world when cohered within as the magnetic force attracts unlike pole to its flux moon yet humes the sun to be blessed by the warmth as the force divine yet gleams in radiance sprinkles the bliss melody when sweet smooches even someone in grief...................superb piece i do appreciate,10/10, thanks for sharing

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Howard Johnson 14 March 2008

Considering that no sentance has no more than four words, Each stanza with deep feelings and brain tugging concepts, This write does not dissapoint.

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Roland Bastien 11 March 2008

This is a divine idea....I can relate to that....bravo mon amie

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