The Raid By Ogechi Veronica Poem by OGECHI VERONICA

The Raid By Ogechi Veronica

Rating: 4.3


In my mother's hut
I lay,
Peacefully,
In harmony, we lived
Enjoying the warmth
And sweet caresses of the cool breeze
Until the raiders came


They saped our palmtree
Milked us and laid us bare
Our last penny
They feasted on
I was enticed
Blinded by his handsomeness
And goodwill


I signed the treaty
I endorsed our doom
So cleverly, he acted
On the sea of my ignorance
He took my pride
With his bait of good fortune
I was innocently hooked


He taught me his customs
I threw away our culture
His God, he brought
I abandoned mine
He usurped my strength
I am drained
He gave me guns and beautiful accessories
A barter for my mother's oil
His trade, he promised to bequeath me
With his wisdom, he traded my ignorance


Cunningly, he took over my father's estates
Ruling over my brothers
And they became slaves
In his plantations
They worked tirelessly
Earning pitiless scorn
I watched tearfully
But kept mute fearfully



Mazi Okonkwo raised a finger
Alas, they executed him
They became chiefs and overlords
In a foreign land
Fearfully and like a god
We become their messengers.

Saturday, October 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: civil rights
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subhas Chandra Chakra 23 April 2016

.It all started due to ignorance. Colonial suppressors have their own way of exploitation. It really shocks when one thinks of those dark days. A very touchy poem revealing the painstaking moment the ancient dwellers of a land suffered post evasion. Thanks for the poem. A perfect 10 for it.

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Chinedu Dike 23 October 2015

A good depiction of the exploitative nature of colonisation, well articulated and insightfully penned in poetic diction with conviction. A lovely piece of poetry bristling with knowledge. Thanks for sharing Ogechi. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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G. Akanji Olaniyi 03 October 2015

Very revealing and thought-provoking! ! !

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