The Rain Poem by Tefo Mahlotle Mello

The Rain

Rating: 5.0


Here I am
Bleating for the rain to rain
I couldn't just stand there
While animals suffer
There was none left in the river
Nor was there anything on the ground either
I couldn't bear to see them dying
I couldn't bear to see us suffering either
So I bow down to the Lord
I couldn't ask for none except for the rain
The rain that will end up all our worries
The rain that will purify us and the animals
The rain that will beautify our land
The rain that will fill up the river with clean water
The rain that will wash away our sins
The rain

Thursday, October 12, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 22 November 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Tefo M. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Tefo Mahlotle Mello 22 November 2017

Thanks, I am looking forward to read your collection

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 October 2017

While animals suffered there was none left in the river, no little water. You were waiting fir rain as it is today. The rain that will end up all our worries will definitely to give water. Rain of grace of God will wash away sins. An amazing poem is brilliantly penned.10

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Tefo Mahlotle Mello 12 October 2017

Glad you like it and I am also glad that it took you to an imaginary world where you've managed to extend it Kumarmani

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Bernard F. Asuncion 12 October 2017

Such an inspiring poem, Tefo.... a huge 10++++

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Tefo Mahlotle Mello 12 October 2017

Thanks Bernard. Glad you liked it. You can find some of my poet at google books.

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