The Rain's Shadow Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen

The Rain's Shadow

Rating: 5.0


Falling, easing, pinging over the night
the rain's shadow,
throughout the horizon
running between she and me

The leaf has reflected the inclined light
dropping her tears from the flight
nobody has meant it to care,
though I am in fear

The gleaming days have gone
I have made my passion too done
but she may be quite undone
and the fire of spring has made me to burn

Falling, easing, pinging over the night
the rain's shadow,
no more turns can't green her meadow
As if the pale sky kisses to sorrow

The rains shadow,
throughout the horizon
running between she and me
falling, easing, pinging over the night

@Musfiq us shaleheen

Tuesday, September 2, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: rain
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Falling, easing, pinging over the night
the rain's shadow,
throughout the horizon
running between she and me
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 10 September 2014

Rain's Shadow is a nice poetic idea and being the central idea of the poem has made the poem really beautiful. A well deserved rating of 10.

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Musfiq us shaleheen

Musfiq us shaleheen

Khulna, Bangladesh
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