Musfiq us shaleheen

Gold Star - 5,374 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

Beauty Of Rose - Poem by Musfiq us shaleheen


When a bud became a rose,
vigorous dreams flooded the heart glee
dumbness flashed on the pensive mood -
quaking mind grew
into the nucleus of dragging love
ocean of emotions catalyzed the kinky close
deep aches popped at the heart and stone
when render conceived
the glimmer chords have splashed
utmost inflames grew to outburst,
bursts into the fire of gaiety -
psyche poured the fathomless passions
till death

@Musfiq us shaleheen,28th November,2012

Topic(s) of this poem: beauty, rose

Form: Prose Poem

Poet's Notes about The Poem

beauty of rose




Comments about Beauty Of Rose by Musfiq us shaleheen

  • Khairul Ahsan (12/10/2013 1:01:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem.
    'quaking mind is nucleus of dragging love, '
    Loved this line.
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  • (10/21/2013 12:19:00 PM)

    quaking mind is nucleus of dragging love, In 7 years you write of the mystery that fear blocks love.
    the glimmer becoming the fire is also very beautiful. Allah has given you your pen.
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  • Ryan Morris (12/8/2012 2:02:00 PM)

    Very deep and thought provoking. Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Madina Morris (12/7/2012 9:57:00 AM)

    Hmmm...i can tell its alot going on in this poem, maybe a little too much going on in this poem, but i love the power and beauty in your choice of words. Very nice :) (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/6/2012 4:26:00 AM)

    beautiful poem, chosen right words/ top markss! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Abaka Blessing Anastasia (12/6/2012 4:25:00 AM)

    a poem 2 read over and over. nice words, powerful art piece. i love dis line 'quaking mind is nucleus of dragging love'', i will love 2 read more of u work. (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (12/4/2012 12:50:00 PM)

    Deep and thought-provoking - love the last line. (Report) Reply

  • (12/4/2012 8:23:00 AM)

    it is brilliant........the flow of words the well pinned lines..they are just amazing

    thank you for sharing sir
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  • (12/3/2012 11:21:00 PM)

    Powerful lines and a theme well moulded into a poem.. Could have been a little longer by 6-8 more lines, I feel.Thank u for sharing.Please check ur inbox for my msg. (Report) Reply

  • Wahab Abdul (12/3/2012 11:41:00 AM)

    very lovely poem indeed, very intense! (Report) Reply

  • Asif Andalib (12/3/2012 2:14:00 AM)

    Lovely write. I liked it (Report) Reply

  • Nader Baheri (12/2/2012 9:51:00 AM)

    nice proses and flowing lines and wonderful words, used in this marvelous poem.
    muchas gracias for sharing~nb
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  • Jahan Zeb (12/1/2012 9:21:00 AM)

    One can thing of the strength of this poem after reading it. The words sound very strong like the message of the poem. Most words are used metaphorically and that makes it interesting for the readers.

    Very Matured.
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  • Xelam Kan™ (11/30/2012 7:05:00 PM)

    like an abstract piece of art the picture z pregnant with so many ideas, different shades and strokes enhance its beauty.......
    full of meaning and widen perception.........
    like to read this matured piece of art
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  • Hazel Durham (11/30/2012 7:33:00 AM)

    A very abstract, colourful, explosion of words embracing the reader! Liked this poem! (Report) Reply

  • Muhammad Mirash (11/30/2012 5:54:00 AM)

    i like your poem, your words giving the new meanings after every reading (Report) Reply

  • (11/29/2012 5:15:00 AM)

    a wonderful poem...... (Report) Reply

  • S.zaynab Kamoonpuri (11/29/2012 4:28:00 AM)

    Hmm an intense poem but i admire d ambiguity. Esp liked how u say, 'burst into fire of gaiety'. (Report) Reply

  • Elizabeth Padillo Olesen (11/28/2012 3:43:00 PM)

    Very strong images are being expressed here, forming deep thought in life. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • April Swan (my Diary Of Bitterweet Chocolate) (11/28/2012 3:14:00 PM)

    very enthusiastic. I admit it caught me by suprise. a nice suprise. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 28, 2012

Poem Edited: Friday, November 17, 2017

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