Hasmukh Amathalal

Gold Star - 401,054 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

The Real Responsive Act - Poem by Hasmukh Amathalal

Responsive act’’

Your soul is no different
Neither is it is present
Nor absent
But remains intact as heavenly felt

I feel it from deep heart
And remain part
Till it aches
And reaches break point

You can't separate
And relate
In isolation
Without confirmation

The path is wide open
And causes often
Pain and agony
Soul remains in stormy condition

You always console
And foil
Any attempt
That needs responsive act

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Comments about The Real Responsive Act by Hasmukh Amathalal

  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (11/8/2015 11:27:00 PM)


    You always console
    And foil
    Any attempt
    That needs responsive act
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  • (11/8/2015 11:26:00 PM)


    A philosophy of life nicely elaborated. Thanks for sharing 10 points. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 8, 2015



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