Young Church

Veteran Poet - 1,107 Points (Lesotho, Maseru)

The Rebirth - Poem by Young Church

The making of myself and I
I have seen it all
All but worthless
worthless to my purpose
purpose of a server

Server to my Lord and His world
World of the lost and found
found youth choking their dreams
Dreams to become Kings and Queens
Queens to conceive golden generations

Generations of true believers
Believers in all righteousness
Righteousness dominant to unjust
Unjust peers on a cruel mission
Mission to eliminate principled peers

The rebirth,
The making of myself and I
Rattled but back on track
It is never too late
It will never be.....

***The Book of End of Times

Comments about The Rebirth by Young Church

  • (1/25/2012 10:49:00 PM)

    A really wonderful poem full of wisdom. Spoken like a poet. great job (Report)Reply

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  • Aqeb Benazir (7/15/2011 2:11:00 PM)

    Amazingly well done! ! it's great the way you moved from one line to the next with the words continuing...makes you want more! ! this would make a nice song though! (Report)Reply

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  • Paul Nkensen Obirigya (6/16/2011 7:49:00 AM)

    Impressive, true believers what we truly need....great thoughts n dreams.. Love dis..too (Report)Reply

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  • (6/13/2011 1:22:00 PM)

    Nice poem. Great sentiments. The poem is rich in imagery and style.
    Great write indeed.
    I give it 10/10.
    Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 13, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, October 6, 2011

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