Young Church

Freshman - 758 Points (Lesotho, Maseru)

The More… - Poem by Young Church

The more vipers persecute
The more true Christians stay
Close to their God
The more true Jews stay
Close to their God
The more true Muslims stay
Close to their God

The more China rejects one God
The more her people suffer
The more Africa stays greedy
The more it turns like an ash
The more US steal from Middle East
The more they disrupt world peace

The more rulers disregard God
The more evil roams the streets
The more darkness rules the day
The more new generation suffers
The more country men turn to rebel
The more the world deteriorates

The more people go astray and astray
The more disasters strike and strike
The more beautiful earth rots and rots
The closer the new kingdom descends.

***The Book of End of Times


Comments about The More… by Young Church

  • (2/7/2012 4:27:00 AM)


    A fantastic poem! Now I know who you are! (Report) Reply

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  • (2/2/2012 2:19:00 PM)


    Magnificent write ne a buti! nice poem man. (Report) Reply

  • (2/1/2012 9:32:00 AM)


    A fantastic poem, really liked it. A great write. (Report) Reply

  • (12/29/2011 3:37:00 AM)


    Church, im quite moved by this poem. It gives an insight on the world politics and viza -viz religion and how the moving away from God could possibly account to the increament in the disasters occurences, in particular China as singled out. Now, myself iam a practicing Christian and i cant disagree with what Church puts forth, problem is we have tried to so much rely on science in search of Answers, negating the Religious (Godly) angle.I love it (Report) Reply

  • (12/24/2011 3:43:00 PM)


    he does it again....nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (12/22/2011 1:17:00 PM)


    Wow, an excellent poem, , , magnificient write! ! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 22, 2011

Poem Edited: Friday, December 23, 2011


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