The Right Love Poem by Asma Zenjali

The Right Love

Rating: 3.5


Why two love each other must break up?
Is it the fate or one of them decides to stop
The fear and feeling of confusion
Should he live the moment,
Or wake up from his illusion
They both know the end will come
When you feel lost and without a home
You may cry not believe and scream!
Then discover that you were just a whim
Love exist that's true and correct
Moves you to other place like a drugs addict
It is kinds and only one of them is the best
Admire your God and forget the rest
At least he won't hurt you or walk away
But watch and protect you the whole day
The only one who can make you happy
Unique you can't find the same
or make a copy!
And do not think by follwing him,
you lose many things..
Your demands will answer,
Even if u ask for wings
I love my god. so much!
He is always with me,
Whether i was right or not..

Tuesday, April 26, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: love,religion
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Abduhoo Salamath 26 August 2016

wonderfull and great words..heart touching poem......thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 May 2016

Your demands will answer, Even if u ask for wings I love my god. so much! He is always with me, Whether i was right or not.. human love experience and faced with the problems in a relationship very often we turn to God and find comfort in God. this is the experience of many...... God is so important in our lives. you have pictured this theme very powerfully here dear poetess. thank yu. tony God bless you.

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Beautifully expressed feelings about true love with Almighty Allah.Very effective and inspirational.Keep it up Asma Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Abderrahmane Dakir 27 April 2016

Nice poem about the unconditional love. God is the compassionate and the merciful. Our goal in this life is the moment to see Him Later. Who is banned to see Him is the unluckiest person was created. Thank you for sharing.

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Khairul Ahsan 26 April 2016

At least he won't hurt you or walk away But watch and protect you the whole day - That's true!

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