Monday, November 23, 2015

The Rivers' Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

I've seen many rivers,
Beside the rocks they lie,
But I've never seen such a river,
With no one standing by.
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Rashmi Pawar
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Kishore Kumar Das 11 May 2016

there is urgent need to control water pollution......well manifested in your poem...

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Roseann Shawiak 05 February 2016

Keeping our rivers clean and sparkling like they are originally would be honoring nature's beauty. Cannot see why people want to go to the river, then do nothing but pollute it before leaving. Excellent poem Rashmi! ! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Rashmi Pawar 05 February 2016

Thanky you

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Rashmi Pawar 05 February 2016

Your welcome and thanky yoi

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Rajnish Manga 23 November 2015

It is our duty to keep our rivers clean and unpolluted. It is only then we will be getting back their water manifold. The poem warns us against our wrong practices also: Bottles and cans are those, People throw in the river to dispose.

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Rashmi Pawar 23 November 2015

Thanks

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Ratnakar Mandlik 23 November 2015

If you use water without misutilizing it Nature will give you twice than you think. Very commendable thought. Enjoyed reading the meaningful poem. Thanks.10 points.

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Rashmi Pawar 26 November 2015

thank you

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