Sunday, June 5, 2011

The Road Ahead Dissolved Into Dust Comments

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The road ahead dissolved into dust
and we could not see the track
nor any of the other fighting vehicles
consisting out of Olifant main battle tanks
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Gert Strydom
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Bonnie Lundgren 05 June 2011

Were you a soldier? Despite some spelling errors (cannon, instead of canon, etc.) this is vivid and soul-catching. Instead of making declarations about how to think about warfare, you simply create an image, because war/fighting isn't really able to be explained away, anyway. Thanks for this poem.

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Gert Strydom

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Johannesburg, South Africa
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