The Saddest Time Of Your Life Poem by peter rodenby

The Saddest Time Of Your Life

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A screaming wind unfastened our grip
Aching we clung, desperately embracing,
Breathing like one.
A tear trickled and twinkled
On a sad swollen face
And dissolved to obscurity
In a shower of rain.
Tired eyes revealed the disenchantment
You felt.
Sobbing shabby despair, we waited
For our bus to come.
Out from the cold winter night.
And I loved you there as I look back
On the saddest time of your life.
When hidden beneath your coat
Your stomach was swollen with carrying
Our unborn child.

Tuesday, January 17, 2006
Topic(s) of this poem: obscurity
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mary-Elizabeth Conn 18 April 2006

Deep stuff. Keep up the good work :)

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Esther Leclerc 03 March 2006

Powerful...............................

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