The Sailor Man Poem by Lotlot Diaz

The Sailor Man

Rating: 5.0


He was young at start
but he sailed careful and clever
and his sailing was likely
to the old sailor man.
for it...
i have shed too much tears.
He have almost reach
the oceans heart
not once
not twice
not trice.
For i have shed my life
not once
not twice
not trice.
I know no river
where he sailed
i know no ocean
where he sailed
but i know to myself
he is a sailor man.

Thursday, August 4, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: sad
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i have been through with this kind of challenge in my life and now i have fully recovered with the help of poetry not with another sailor man.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siddartha Montik 18 December 2016

For i have shed my life not once not twice not trice. Beautiful peace of expression! loved reading it.. every line! ! ! thank you Poet! ! full vote! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 05 August 2016

Expression of sadness through humor is amazingly done. Sailor man is very wonderful example in this poem definitely. Young sailor also can reach the destination. Very amazing presentation makes this interesting...10

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Asia Villaflor 06 August 2016

thank you sir...god bless you and your family.

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