The Same Trail Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

The Same Trail

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Fences are erected covering all nooks and corners,
A few are barbed and others are fixed with doors,
All are invisible, just in front of us, hard to walk through,
As if a solution exist to the existing problems those are tough.

A few have passed through the fences of culture and rules,
Got them badly battered to be called as rebels,
Many live within the demarcated boundaries,
Use the doors conveniently to exit and enter.

All these boundaries have made us to be sick and dull,
As if we are tied down to the ground, not to have an option,
Luckily we had acquired the knowledge and experience,
Before the societal obligations were rested on our shoulders.

We have no other option, except living within these societies,
Growing from the infant to the matured old individuals,
Invisible metallic cobwebs, not to be disturbed at home and work,
Hundreds of generation have lived and died taken the same trail.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hans Vr 21 November 2012

let's get out of the box, out of the cobwebs. Nice vision in this poem. Sometimes we are trapped in the box but whenever we manage to get out of it, it feels great

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Wahab Abdul 20 November 2012

excellent poem.. love it....

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Lyn Paul 18 November 2012

What an amazing way describing Life. So very clever Veeraiyah

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