The Scattered Dream Comments
There lived a boy in my city,
Who was poor but had big dream,
Of becoming a doctor with dignity,
And his boat was sailing good in stream.
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Very well written. The poem has moved me very much. You have poured a lot of pathos into it. But I would prefer the title 'A shattered dream' instead of the existing one. Anyway a nice poem to read. A perfect 10. Thanks for sharing.....
Such a sad story, I wish it had a happy ending, but life isn't all roses. Thank you for sharing this tragic tale.
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12/11/2025 3:52:20 PM # 1.0.0
ok, , , we all know that there r 2 faces in this world, the good and the bad....life has full of trials.we should have wide ideas to see what will happen in the future, and that is precautions...we should pretend we know, so that no one will fool us...or we should think that not all people are good, so...by experience we could learn...o, hope u r fine...smileeee