Tuesday, June 21, 2016

The Sea, The Sea. Comments

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Cyrus dead, and now bereft of purpose and reward,
The Grecian army faced their only choice, retreat,
Across the seedless deserts, the high and icy passes
Of Persia and of Armenia. Northwards they trudged
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Tom Billsborough
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Bri Edwards 07 November 2018

I REALLY CAME HERE LOOKING FOR BEACH BUNNIES! ! ! !

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tom billsborough 08 November 2018

Me too! Always on the lookout. Obviously there weren't any or they'd have been shouting something else rather than the Sea, the Sea! Probably Vi! Vi! Oh.. my...maybe we should rewrite the story, Br. It might even be closer to the truth! And certainly a lot more fun.

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Bri Edwards 07 November 2018

(cont.) What a bunch of Greek babies they were! ! ! ! ! the Marines (U.S.) would MAKE MEN OF THEM, OR they'd die in the attempt! ! ! Semper Fi! ! ! ! to MyPoemList. bri :) a Poet's Notes would have saved me (your friend! ! !) time. (:

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Bri Edwards 07 November 2018

(cont.) Thálatta! Thálatta! (Greek: Θάλαττα! θάλαττα! — The Sea! The Sea!) was the shouting of joy when the roaming 10,000 Greeks saw Euxeinos Pontos (the Black Sea) from Mount Theches (Θήχης) in Trebizond, after participating in Cyrus the Younger's failed march against the Persian Empire in the year 401 BC. ok, wrong Cyrus i had at first. (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 07 November 2018

or...did you mean my mean Uncle Cyrus? ..may he rest in! ! ! i guess i can resume reading at line #3 now. To fight another's cause which now his death had cancelled...does this and line 1 refer to the same corpse? ? (cont.)

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Bri Edwards 07 November 2018

this guy? [i found at least 4 DIFFERENT accounts online of how he died! ! ! ! ] Cyrus II of Persia, commonly known as Cyrus the Great and also called Cyrus the Elder by the Greeks, was the founder of the Achaemenid Empire, the first Persian Empire. Wikipedia Born: 600 BC, Anshan, Iran Died: December 4,530 BC, Syr Darya (cont.)

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