The Second Women Poem by shelly kiran

The Second Women

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The second woman.
Hadno right to love the man,
But she listened to her heart
And not brain.
In exam of love in spite of her efforts she failed.
She had none to console her,
Presented as a culprit,
who controls men,
She wept alone and suffered alone,
She could not even talk to him on phone,
She died many times,
waited for years to let her dreams fulfilled,
She was fresh water fish,
who was sliced and grilled,
Her face was wrinkled,
her hairs were silver,
She suffered mentally,
Her beauty was withered,
She was tempted by everything that glittered,
Now she is alone and does not talk of love,
Everyone questioned her integrity,
She became symbol of infidelity,
She died alone,
she uttered no words,
As if she had no words to explain.

Saturday, April 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 14 April 2018

She died many times, waited for years to let her dreams fulfilled, She was fresh water fish, who was sliced and grilled, .love...... but such a bad ending.......... God give such people to change the circumstances.. love ur poem. tony

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Khairul Ahsan 21 July 2018

'Everyone questioned her integrity, She became symbol of infidelity' - women who wreck another woman's family end up in unfortunate consequences.

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Carl Roussell 30 April 2018

This is your best so far!

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Shelly Kiran 14 April 2018

Unnikrishnan E S thankyou friend for your words,suggestions and compliments.😇

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Shelly Kiran 14 April 2018

Dr .tony Brahmin thank you so much.

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Unnikrishnan E S 14 April 2018

Hi Shelly, Lovely, but heart rending poem. It is said, love is like an Hour Glass, the brain empties itself as the heart fills up. Yes that is what happens. And love recognises no Rights. Everyone has absolute right to love anybody. When it is reciprocated love is rendered right. Lovely write.

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