The Shadows Poem by Claire Hunter

The Shadows

Rating: 5.0


A girl runs through the alley
Anxiously looking over her shoulder
They follow her like bees to honey
Escaping the meanacing shadows that chase her
They flit over walls and through the cracks
And over the cobblestone floor
The girl knows there is no chance at hope
So she will run no more

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adrian Cordova 17 April 2010

Great detail, a superb analogy, and clearer then water.10/10

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Afzal Shauq 20 January 2010

wow so sweet and meaningful...loved it 10/10

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Killing Hope 21 April 2009

You got a nice flow in this poem, good job.

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Sue Sie 20 April 2009

Wow..this is very good...scary too...but I like the scene you have created here...well done...10+

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Joseph Poewhit 20 April 2009

Spell binding the fast action of the words

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