Fay Slimm

Rookie - 102 Points (Ageless. / in Cornwall U.K.)

The Shell. - Poem by Fay Slimm

Ivory white, and quite symmetrical,
It oozes artistry.

Hardened by time and water's frenetic
Movement, this shell imparts
It's own magnetic pull on my poet's mind.

Bright bold stripes adorn it.
Holed now, minutely, by another kind
Of life, it still fits
My idea of perfect shape for usage.

Up from the watery deep,
I will keep this former house of beauty.

It's unused silent harvest I will reap.

Comments about The Shell. by Fay Slimm

  • Susan Jarvis (10/28/2009 7:41:00 PM)

    Your astute and beautifully chosen words portray an almost photographic image of this amazing shell, and the closing line is truly enchanting. S :) (Report) Reply

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  • (10/17/2009 1:17:00 PM)

    an empty shell bleached by the sun, washed up on a sandy shore
    once scooting on the oceans floor a mollusk with a trap door
    discarded till this day, and taken home by our Fay
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  • Sandra Martyres (10/16/2009 9:14:00 AM)

    A shell inspired poem....really beautifully said Fay....10++ (Report) Reply

  • (10/16/2009 8:26:00 AM)

    Fay, I love your perception and analytical approach. I also love sheshells on the sheshore. Great poem
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  • (10/16/2009 8:15:00 AM)

    lovely words fay 10.... (Report) Reply

  • (10/16/2009 8:15:00 AM)

    Fay, wonderful poetry can be gleaned by staring natures beauty in the face. You have done both with accuracy and choice of word.10/10
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Poem Submitted: Friday, October 16, 2009

Poem Edited: Wednesday, November 4, 2009

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