The kitchen light at four A.M., dull distant warm world.
The wipers streaked and thumped in cold contrast.
He could see her wondering, peeking at the window, waiting.
He shuddered a shame known all too well to the drifter.
The league of distinguished drunks, found him clever.
The band of dark side hooligans reveled in his cynical sneer.
Wasn't he witty tonight? , timely, snarling jabs so irreverent,
How he crowed and thrilled them with tales of derision.
Part jester, part prince they hung on every bawdy tale.
The world outside the bar, lost in a fog for one more night.
The riotous barbaric laughter and shouts that turned to song.
Oh wasn't he godlike in protestation and damning declaration? .
Philosophers all were they, the whiskey and beer proclaimed.
Let night blend with eternity, God how happy they would be.
Failure was mocked, regret was banished beneath the jolly roger.
Pirates in search of a town to sack or a rum ship to plunder.
Feet stretched, fully clothed, with the couch as his life raft.
She had gathered the sleeping hulk and by sheer will rescued him.
With curtains carefully closed, to shield him from the light.
A merciful island oasis for the corpse of a shipwrecked fool.
Isn't it refreshing not having to impress a bunch of drunks? Now you can try to impress us, instead- - which you've done. It completely quelled any desire to sack and plunder it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This poem combines your gift for truly colorful storytelling with your philosophical side. I waited to let the story sink in before commenting as I first got wrapped up in the imagery, which is so vivid and ALIVe! For a minute I really though you were talking about pirates! :) . Then I realized... Oh... This is a driving guy going home after a night at the bar with his buddies while the wide waits for him... Did I get it right? The last stanza is really downright amazing... The line where the couch is his life raft and then where the wife closes the blinds to shield him from the light... They're both well done but sad. He has such a lovely existence with the 'soirits, ' but then there's nothing left at home. Great poem.