ashwini laghu

The Sitting On Sea Side

blue sky

blue sea

and blowing wind

specially on the evening when sunset

and some sheep and boat passing through

u will be in illusion between sky and sea

where is the limit up to

the free man

along

sometimes with friends

nothing to do

so free

with naked feet

waves of water touching the feet

like its a romantic place

where music of waves

blow itself

only for me

without any words

but its universal music

any body can sing on there one tongue

kahile bata yesto lekhna sikya ho?

my eyes lost in a dream

with blue deepth of sea n open sky

where dream land begains

with colour of life

no thin to hide

only fair n faith from evry side

just for the time i feels like world is mine

the evry dawn of sunshine

n the end pleasure of sunset

where every waves have a stroy

who have traveled so long so far

in every part of this world

but returend again n again for sever billion times

.....

but always am in illusion

that sky is blue or the sea is blue?

if u say sky is colourless

came n see the image in sea

it will be seen as bright it could be

if u say sea is blue

it will try to proof how transparent it could be

they will say together

the life is between the colourless world

the sky, sea n the wind

where the life of yours being

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 19, 2009
Poem Edited: Sunday, July 19, 2009

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  • Rup Pokharel (8/16/2009 3:33:00 PM)

    Laghu,
    I salute your creativity.
    Well written..
    ..please if iam not mistaken ship fits in place of SHEEP in4th line.
    and do take care of the minor errors
    Good poem indeed.
    Keep it up.
    If you can give time do go thro' mine too and share me a vote if deserve..
    10++ for you.

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  • Marieta MaglasMarieta Maglas (7/19/2009 6:06:00 AM)

    'If u say sea is blue

    it will try to proof how transparent it could be''
    nice descriptive poem...10

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