She walked the flatlands
with the sincerity of a dullard
when her thoughts crumbled..
causing memory pain,
solidifying errors
of judgement and fault,
the weight of consience
and a heavy heart...
but she smiled,
a superficial smile,
and carried on
walking the last mile home.
I really liked this poem it reminded me of the fact that sometimes when I'm just walking down the road always on my own some embarrassing momment flashes to mind and I think what did I do that for
A poem expresing poignance. Kudos for the way u hav pennd it. Nice to read u again sally.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your poem is well done, and meaningfull. It shows her angst but it makes me want to know why.
Thanks for your comment, Andy.Much appreciated.