The Space Between Poem by Jake Deeds

You are always there… When I need a compassionate ear And the world around me closes in When the vision becomes unclear And my patience there wears thin.. very nice poem of love and emotions and being there in times of need. but at the end the problem is that you are there and i am here in need.............love, nearness, desire, wishes and problems......... thank u dear poet. tony

This one here is great as well, provides me insight on my next piece haha

I really appreciate the composition, especially in tandem with the title, though the two final lines are too explicit for my liking, but that's strictly personal :)

great poem good work