Jake Deeds

Rookie - 297 Points (5/11/1965 / Arkansas)

A Kiss From A Rose - Poem by Jake Deeds

I've spanned the edges of echelon's ledges
And languished the austere abyss
From the hue of grey's obscurity
And time's eternal perpetuity
In stone I make my pledges
And intomb it with a kiss...<><

Topic(s) of this poem: love and friendship

Comments about A Kiss From A Rose by Jake Deeds

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (6/3/2017 10:13:00 AM)

    austere abyss
    grey's obscurity
    eternal perpetuity
    intombing with a kiss.
    I was wondering about the usage of words and the
    Coinage of words together.. you are a master of words……. Conveying a lot. Thank you dear poet.. tony
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  • Dr.tony Brahmin (1/8/2016 6:18:00 AM)

    In stone I make my pledges
    And intomb it with a kiss...[][
    Jake Deeds

    Rhythmic endings of the lines.. i like it very much. the use of words and its meaning. very very nice poem. much better than writing long poems. thank you very much. tony
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  • Rocky Lizardi.brown (11/28/2014 11:18:00 AM)

    This is art. Magnificent poetry. (Report) Reply

  • (11/28/2014 8:11:00 AM)

    Sometimes a piece of art has no meaning - and its sheer beauty lays within that fact... As the Mona Lisa Smile. It's the hint of a secret that is so mesmerizing sometimes - and not always its reveal. Your palette of words here create a beautiful mind swirl. The fact that it takes me nowhere is what ravished me so.... In deed a moment well spent - reading this. Thank you... (Report) Reply

  • Babatunde Aremu (11/28/2013 7:04:00 AM)

    Well-penned. I like it. Kudos (Report) Reply

  • Ruby Honeytip (11/28/2012 9:39:00 PM)

    Very cool write: ^)
    Congrats on getting POD.
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  • (10/26/2011 4:39:00 AM)

    'From the hue of grey’s obscurity
    And time’s eternal perpetuity'

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  • (7/17/2011 11:06:00 AM)

    Nice poem composed with vivid imagery. I liked the theme very much. Kudos to your skill. Keep it up. I rated it 10.
    Thanks for sharing.....
    I shall be highly obliged if you please read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4.
    Warmest regards
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 17, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, January 31, 2016

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