The Sparrow's Chicks Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

The Sparrow's Chicks

Rating: 5.0


The sparrow couple
Busy in feeding their chicks
By turn all day long!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Purdy 27 April 2012

Sharp, precise picture given here. This one is fine. Perhaps you do best when not hampered by a rhyme-scheme. Here you have escaped the strait-jacket occasioned by traditional form by paying it no mind, building form through the movement and necessities of the poem's materials and its insight. Even better trick is to accept the strait-jacket yet still escape. - Bep.

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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