The Spring Has Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

The Spring Has

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Spring has lovely means to bring
All birds together with cuckoo to sing
Not by poor along but also king
To feel about change around the ring

Young veins allow and open to flow
For fresh blood to speed fast and show
Its real color for nature's love
Trust it more and strongly believer

It is time for changing old cloth
We it is nice time for both
To breathe and stay together
To be called innocent and passionate lover

It is in fact a lesson
For various reasons
If natures adopts change
We should look forward and manage

Love is to be made exception
It has no reason to feel for relation
It is same in autumn or monsoon
But spring may make it possible soon

What a way to observe and watch?
To get lost in moment to catch
Move around in hand to hand
Not to make others to feel jealous about friend

Moon is the only witness
Where lovers find their true face
No way to get lost over in any case
As it seems to be the only race

Silver light hunts around
Make all surrounding silvery to be found
Not only beautiful land but trees too shine
Make it superfluous to feel fine

I close the eyes when go near
Just lower the lips without any fear
It makes soul to feel and bear
The closeness to feel with few tears

It shall be endeavor of both souls
To seek solace and warmth not to commit fails
It is one of the memorable moments
To feel and make other to feel as heavenly sent

It may soon slip over to autumn
Many lovers may think bad and condemn
Yet it is change and time to settle down
To know each other and own

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 October 2012

Nice Timothy Ramirez16 minutes ago Nice, I like it Comment +1 Good idea but very conventional

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 October 2012

Sibghatullah Khan14 minutes ago I don't know why all good ideas melt into a love story. The poets start off celebrating the coming of Spring and end up smooching and caressing the beloveds or lovers. But, of course, Spring is the right season for love. What else they would do. A poet like T.S. Eliot starts out his Love Song with Let's go then, you and I but, we know, it's not a traditional love poem. Traditional love theme is the the most beaten down topic for poetry. If you wanna make a difference, please write on something else. Comment +1 ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 October 2012

Seema Salman14 minutes ago ok

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 20 October 2012

Spring has lovely means to bring All birds together with cuckoo to sing Not by poor along but also king To feel about change around the ring

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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