The Stars Are Falling Poem by ashleymarie love zysek

The Stars Are Falling

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I am laying in a field,
my arms act as a shield.
Protecting my eyes from what is coming,
They cover my ears protecting me from the evil lies.
The tears roll down my face as i tie up my shoelace.
The pressure is too much.
I can not breathe.
Is this reality, or is this is just a bad dream.
YES YES
its only a bad dream.
But then i hear it
my sweet sweet mothers voice, and and..........
i come in.
YES YES the stars must be falling.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Delicate Heart 05 May 2009

A swaying piece you become lost whilst in reading, very tender poem

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James Mclain 29 April 2009

In Alabama they fall as rain the tears through the sky from your eye..iip.

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John Lyday 24 April 2009

Not a good idea for the stars to fall. I like them way up there. This is a good poem ashleymarie.

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lockport, new york
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