Baron von Savage

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The Streets - Poem by Baron von Savage

I implore you to,
Open your eyes fool
And your ears too,
Your vigilance is crucial in these streets that seek to devour you.

These streets,
Are more than tarred roads
And concrete they have a pulse,
A rhythm,
And if you listen closely
You can hear their heart beat,
Vibrant and violent.

Topic(s) of this poem: life

Form: Ode

Comments about The Streets by Baron von Savage

  • (9/18/2015 2:37:00 AM)

    Close to life and beautifull, thanks! (Report) Reply

    Lunge Ndzimande (9/18/2015 3:31:00 AM)

    Than you for, hope to read your work soon.

    Lunge Ndzimande (9/18/2015 3:29:00 AM)

    Thank you

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  • Kelly Kurt (9/17/2015 12:52:00 PM)

    Some streets are alive with violence, while others lead a life of serenity. Thanks for sharing, Lungelo (Report) Reply

    Lunge Ndzimande (9/18/2015 5:30:00 AM)

    I appreciate your feedback, and I hope to read your work soon.

  • Miraj Raha (9/17/2015 9:46:00 AM)

    Oh lovely, brilliant Ode.Yes the streets are always aware, makes me feel scary. (Report) Reply

    Lunge Ndzimande (9/18/2015 3:33:00 AM)

    Thank you for your comment! The streets are a very scary place, but nestled within all that chaos and danger, is hope...

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, September 17, 2015

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