Monday, November 20, 2017

The Struggle Comments

Rating: 5.0

Why did I get in the damn boat?
Now I'm in the middle of nowhere
Struggling to stay afloat.
Waves wash over me, and I gasp for air.
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Jazib Kamalvi 01 December 2017

A nice poetic imagination, amar. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 November 2017

A great write full of vivid images.

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