Tuesday, September 2, 2014

The Tall Ride Comments

Rating: 5.0

Roller coaster ride on
The one standing taller
Will be exciting he said
And I followed my friend.
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla
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Amitava Sur 07 September 2014

Very nicely you described your experiencing the ride on roller coaster with height bumps, twist and turns all are in our life. Enjoyed the descriptions.

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Geetha Jayakumar 03 September 2014

Wow. Wonderful poem. Beautiful roller coaster ride filled with fun, but left with little back soar. Loved the way you presented it. Thanks for sharing.

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Somanathan Iyer 03 September 2014

It appears an adventure at this age! but a thrilling enjoyment. A nice finish to show the uncertainty.

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