Friday, September 19, 2008

The Temptress Comments

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But you melt like wax when the heat of my fingers touches you
When the kiss on your red lips shall unleash the sighs to be discovered
Lover though I am unfortunate for the temptress as you are
Nothing are you when my gaze shall not
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Reshma Ramesh 19 September 2008

thank you.....iam honored.......: -))

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Dr.Wardha Jawdat 19 September 2008

very very nice..a very apt sequel..like the classic lovers retort...'nothing are you when my gaze shall not in abstraction define the sensuous curves! '...nice indeed

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