The Tree Flying High In The Sky Poem by SRIRANJI ARATISANKAR

The Tree Flying High In The Sky

Rating: 5.0


Fascinating tree calm and quiet all day long
Slow-moving sweet breeze raising gentle waves
The birds sitting on the branches singing songs
The valley overflowing a tune in middle octave.

The tree flying high in the sky saw at night
Clotted hair-like cloud clung round the roots
Piercing the awning canopy mounting upright
Disappearing the morose misty earth under foot.

Monday, July 25, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: mystery,nature,night
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
M Asim Nehal 25 July 2016

Nicely thought poem, great imagination, nice flow with some superb imagery, a perfect 10.

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