My team mate tosses the ball to me,
A burst of hope and I advance forward.
The opponents surge forward with glee,
And I dodge them one by one.
They curse angrily as I skip through their defence.
I have a feeling of determination,
I have the energy to sprint to the try line
My enemies try and smash me to the ground
I evade and view an opening, nothing is in my way.
I sprint forwards, the try line drawing closer.
No one can catch me, everything seems to be in slow motion.
I reach the line and smash the ball into the ground with triumph.
A roar of excitement erupts from the crowd.
My team mates scream, running towards me.
Hug me and clap me on the back.
My first game. The try was unexpected.
A tear of happiness. And it wipes the dirt away from my face.
The Try of a Lifetime.
No problem ;) I love playing rugby, it's one of my favorite sports. This try was the first for my team.
I used to be a rugby player and this piece reminds me of those lovely moments of the dirty but beautiful games! ! thanks Jordan! !
This is really good, you wouldnt of thought it was a first poem, well done: ]
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Really good makes me want to play rugby.....now if only i was only i was any good at it Please comment my newest poem on Halloween ' Oh If Only' thanks if you do Jordan