Thursday, September 29, 2005

The Two Oaks Comments

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He was old. Even for an oak tree.
So ancient that he could not remember
which wars had ended one way or else
and when he saw his first belcher of smoke,
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mary Nagy 30 September 2005

Awww! I have always had a love for trees but this personification really warms me. I think it's so interesting to think about life from the trees perspective... Very lovely but also sad of course. I loved it. Sincerely, Mary

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 30 September 2005

Very sad, touching poem.....Never know what can be....

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Uriah Hamilton 30 September 2005

H, you can be incredibly creative! I enjoyed this one on several levels.

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Pradeep Dhavakumar 29 September 2005

Very good poem, Herbert. Loved this One. Thank you.

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Raynette Eitel 29 September 2005

This is really a good one, Herbert. Ready to go. Yes. And how nice that he knew. Yessiree! (Good old logger word.) Raynette

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