The Unforgiven Poem by Jamal Brown

The Unforgiven



A young boy travels, with no place to go.
A sad young girl slaves unethically for her abbusive father.
A single teenage mother tries to overcome and forget her past.
A single teenage father tries to raise a child with no help.
A depressed teenager, who doesn't think that life is worth living anymore.
A broken hearted mother who's child has become a memory.
A sad teenage girl, who's boyfriend is a ghost of yesterday.
A young teen, who has found himself/herself in homosexuality, and
who's family can't seem to except that.
A lonely alchoholic father, who doesn't know what to do anymore.
A pitiful child who was brought up in abuse.
A person who is looking for answers.
A bitter sickness of hatred has poisoned this system that was once love.
What do all of these stories have in common?
Why are they important?
These, have been casted away from society.
These, are the unforgiven.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ben Burger 20 October 2011

Yes, yes this poem is amazing. It is so brutally honest, it's amazing. This is only the first poem of yours that I've read, and I will be looking more.

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