The Untold Feeling Poem by Annie Juliet

The Untold Feeling

Rating: 5.0


I cry when you are in pain,
Never let you fall sick,
never made you wear dirty cloths,
never let you starve for food,
expecting nothing......

I try to be a minister,
an advisor, a friend, a comapanion,
a love, a peacemaker, a cook,
a homemaker, ..........
in all parts of your life - I walk with you
expecting nothing......

I carry you in my soul n heart,
And I carry you in me physically..
deliver with pain
work to being up a healthy generation.
expecting nothing.....

You have shown your-
office pressure & family tension on me..
I have never complained about any..
I have tolerated anything and everything in silent.
expecting nothing.....

Have you ever tried to understand that
every female have a heart...
who spends all life just loving you forever & ever
expecting nothing? ? ? ? ?

If else.. Pls take time to do NOW! ! ! ! ! !

THE UNTOLD FEELING of a WIFE...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 28 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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