Saturday, June 20, 2015

The Unusual Dream Comments

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Once upon a time I had a dream,
which was not as soft as cream.
Not the chocolate rivers and trees,
nor the flying cats and fleece.
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Arundathi Santosh
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Dr Antony Theodore 04 October 2018

Next I could see the dream I wanted to see, which was to make sadness affecting none. Most people only think of themselves these days, not helping the needy in any known way. Let your dream come true in your life. let you find consolation and inner joy in helping the needy....... love this poem.. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 15 January 2016

Next I could see the dream I wanted to see, which was to make sadness affecting none. Most people only think of themselves these days, not helping the needy in any known way. through this dream you are bringing in a great idea. help the needy, the poor, do not abandon anyone. it is a heavenly call for you. wonderful ideas. thank you. tony

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Chinedu Dike 27 June 2015

Beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and insightfully penned with a call for universal brotherhood of man, and charity especially to the uncharitable. A lovely poem with good rhyme scheme. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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