The Way I Feel Right Now Poem by Jon Edward Walker

The Way I Feel Right Now

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I feel funny
parts of me are squishy like bread dough
and others hard like a fence post
some are stringy and taught
some loosely dangle.
my middle area swells
like a balloon and hangs
off me as if it weren’t a part of
me or maybe as if it doesn’t want
to be
I feel funny

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anand Shankar 13 February 2010

its wonderful to see how the human mind feels itself at different times... good write!

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Joy Vanderhelm 22 January 2006

LOL. That's quite an interesting description. Just remember that appearances can be deceiving...

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