Wednesday, September 10, 2014

The Way Out Of The Deep Comments

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The way out of the deep is to sail out of the deep
In a canoe in the deep you shouldn't fall a sleep
Out in the deep is where danger mostly creeps
As a large sea's wave could easily sweeps
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Clarence Prince
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Unwritten Soul 03 November 2014

The rhythm just nicely composed along your meaningful lines, great work too

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Gladys Brown Prince 28 October 2014

Indeed, Jesus is the way out of the deep, once we will trust Him. Thank you for sharing this lovely piece of work, Clarence.

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Valsa George 09 October 2014

In the deep if your life is falling in a heap Don't be a fool who will think of taking a leap When strife hits in the deep Christ you must seek Pray to the Lord, whilst you can still speak He will send you help directly from above Love this stanza and the highly rhyming poem with the exhortation to turn to God!

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