The Way You Make Me Feel Poem by Brianna Trombley

The Way You Make Me Feel

Rating: 4.8


The way you make me feel
Its not hard to explain
I feel like one of those girls in the movies
Who gets kissed in the rain

I feel like I’m on top of the world
With no want to come down
I feel like a princess at a ball
Wearing the most beautiful gown

I feel like I’m back in high school
In love for the first time
I feel like a super hero
That can save the world from crime

I feel like I’m on an all time high
From which I cannot fall
I feel like a little kid at Disneyland
The characters, rides and all

All these ways you make me feel
And you don’t even know it
I wish I could tell you all of this
Because by cupids arrow I’ve been hit

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Lovely flowing imagery and nice rhyme. I feel like rejoicing after reading this. Your words paint pictures of happiness. Top marks Karin Anderson

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, , , , , , 21 January 2009

oh i know the feeling love it!

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Riquetta Elliott 21 January 2009

I use to have that feeling with ex. Good job girl :)

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Greenwolfe 1962 20 January 2009

You got some real good rhymes in this. I love this style. You presented the poem well. The readers will love it. GW62

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Kimber Harrison 11 January 2009

It literally put a smile on my face. It was perfect and relatable and perfect. I loved it!

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